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Bill Dix
12-10-2009, 09:30 AM
D90; 80-400 VR @ 370mm; ISO 400; f/6.3 @ 1/3200s. Matrix metering @ -1.3 EV. HH.

Bunche Beach in the late afternoon. The sun was still a bit high and a bit too far to my right, but after numerous attempts I got one where his bill was not totally submerged in the mudflats. C&C welcome.

denise ippolito
12-10-2009, 09:36 AM
Bill, Very nice details and sharpness. If it were mine I might crop the bottom, just to leave the legs reflected and add a bit up top. I like the water colors. Maybe lighten the eye. Nice to get the entire bill out of the water. Very nicely done.

Axel Hildebrandt
12-10-2009, 10:10 AM
Nice feeding pose, eye contact and sharpness. Another vote for a crop off the bottom, maybe where the reflection of the legs ends.

Bill Dix
12-10-2009, 10:41 AM
Thank you Denise and Axel. Maybe something like this? I probably added a bit too much at the top, in the interest of keeping the outermost ripples on the left and a 2:3 ratio. In this case sacrificing the standard format might improve the image?? What do you think?

Axel Hildebrandt
12-10-2009, 10:44 AM
Looks definitely better! I would probably crop a tad off the top since I don't worry too much about standard formats.

denise ippolito
12-10-2009, 11:21 AM
Bill, It looks much better to me and I agree w/ Axel a tiny sliver off the top.

Rodney Flowers
12-10-2009, 12:38 PM
Great image. The repost really improves the image.

Stu Bowie
12-10-2009, 12:53 PM
Super low angle, and I like the feeding pose. Good sharp feather detail captured, and agree with your repost to take some off the top.