View Full Version : Ruddy Turnstone
denise ippolito
12-03-2009, 08:36 AM
Canon 40D
500mm
ISO 250
1/500 sec. at f/7.1
EV -2/3
Tripod
Barnegat Lighthouse
Axel Hildebrandt
12-03-2009, 08:40 AM
I like the look-back pose and sharpness. Maybe a bit more contrast and room at the bottom?
Jim Fenton
12-03-2009, 08:49 AM
I like the crop / pose and sharpness.
Saturation and contrast look a bit low? Perhaps it just needs to be a little bit warmer?
RakeshDhareshwar
12-03-2009, 11:05 AM
Lovely use of DOF to get this guy popping out of the screen . Personally and it is a very personal view , I feel that the incomplete bird somehow leaves the 'x' factor out of the composition .
Jim Fenton
12-03-2009, 03:11 PM
I'll chime in on the missing legs / feet or as Rakesh reffered to it "incompleteness".
For thoseof us who photograph these types of shorbirds in natural rocky habitata, this is how they are frequently seen.
Personally, and I do agree that it's personal taste, seeing the main body of the bird in it's natural environment....simply looks natural :)
It's totally different that creating images of them when they are out on a sand / tidal flat.
Michael Zajac
12-03-2009, 03:45 PM
I like the look back pose and the colors of the rocks add interest. Sharp details. I agree w/ Jim this is a nice habitat image and I don't need to see the feet. Nice job w/ this.
denise ippolito
12-03-2009, 06:07 PM
Thankyou all for your comments. I appreciate the feedback. It's nice to hear how others feel.
PS-Jim, I added a bit of warmth to the image and it does look good. Thanks
Arthur Morris
12-03-2009, 07:19 PM
Sharp with almost enough d-o-f for the tail. EXP good, head angle perfect for the over-the shoulder pose. Count me in the show-me-the-whole-bird club <smile> See you soon.
denise ippolito
12-03-2009, 08:33 PM
Artie, Thanks for commenting and see ya soon.
Harshad Barve
12-03-2009, 09:12 PM
excellent image , great feather details
TFS
Doug Brown
12-03-2009, 10:24 PM
Agree with above comments Denise. The bird looks oversharpened on my monitor; I'd try backing off a bit. And a slightly warmer color temp would improve the image IMO. Love the eye contact and habitat.
Indranil Sircar
12-03-2009, 11:06 PM
Wonderful image, Denise. Love the eye contact and look back pose.
denise ippolito
12-04-2009, 06:14 PM
Thankyou all for your most helpful comments.
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