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jfranciskay
11-29-2009, 06:38 PM
Looks like I caught this little fella dipping into the berries this morning, as evidenced by the red stain on its beak. Cloned out branch on bottom, cropped, adjusted levels a tad. Canon 400/5.6 + 1.4TC, EXIF Intact.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2541/4144749099_a8d06f6846_o.jpg

kenn threed
11-29-2009, 07:07 PM
A nearly perfect pose, perch, bg, and composition.
Appears more too bright than over-exposed, and likely doesn't need as much sharpening as used here.
I'd also try to deal with the red (berry stain?)... makes her look like a raptor ;)

A very nice shot really... I'd just process it differently.

hth,

Kenn

Arthur Morris
11-29-2009, 07:39 PM
Welcome to both above. Does look bright, especially the lichens. In fact, they are likely over-exposed.... I like the head angle and the sharpness. If you eliminate the buds/twigs (???) bottom left it would be an improvement. Lastly, the dark/light BKGR transitions are somewhat distracting.

Daniel Cadieux
11-29-2009, 09:17 PM
Agree with the boys above. Some parts could/should be toned down. I'd remove the OOF small twigs jotting up at bottom left. I love the berry residue on the bill, very cool.

Chris van Rooyen
11-30-2009, 06:15 AM
Love the sharpness and and the posture. Agree with toning down the lights a bit.