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Sabyasachi Patra
11-15-2009, 11:51 AM
Canon EOS 1D Mark II, Canon EF 28-135 IS, ISO 100, f14, 1/80, full frame, mirror lock up.

Look forward to your critiques.

Cheers,
Sabyasachi

Roman Kurywczak
11-15-2009, 06:48 PM
Hey Sabyasachi,
I like the way you composed this...with small gray are to slightly large to largest r to l and then small bit of greenrey to large bit of water to largest r to left! Very clever comp and nice diagonals to boot. A recoomendation for BPN presentations with a lot of white/grays....a thin black border to give seperation and definition will help here...not necessary for projection. You may want to see what you can pull out of the whites for more definition but a very strong and nice composition and nicly thought out.

Dave Mills
11-15-2009, 11:36 PM
Hi Sabyasachi, I too like your comp which appears well thought out. I might have gone with a polarizer on this to minimize the glare off the rocks. It would have slowed your SS but there are other settings to compensate for that.

Dennis "Curly" Buchner
11-18-2009, 03:42 PM
Good eye Sabyasachi

Grady Weed
11-19-2009, 04:57 PM
It has a nice wet look. Love the green plant to offset the rocks and smooth milky water. I also like the v formed by the convergence of the water.