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Bill Foxworthy
02-14-2008, 03:10 PM
Canon 40D, 1/50 sec, f/11, flash fired. ISO 400, 100-400L

Alfred Forns
02-14-2008, 09:15 PM
I like it Bill Does have a Certain appeal MIght like it even better without the top branch You have a good creative vision !!!!

Robert O'Toole
02-14-2008, 10:26 PM
Hey cool idea, I like this one Bill, The design and composition are very cool. Maybe a little sharpening would imporove it.

Robert

edward saltau
02-14-2008, 11:16 PM
yes, i think it needs a little sharpening too. If you remove the top branch perhaps extend the top and left canvas just slightly to make the leaf a bit smaller in the frame?

Jeroen Stel
02-15-2008, 02:53 AM
Hi Bill,

I like the idea behind this and think it might have worked better (more dramatically) in black and white and like others suggested without the top branch.
I do feel there is something strange going on with the colours and sharpness of the current image perhaps due to post-processing.

Greetings,

Jeroen Stel

John Cooper
02-15-2008, 04:07 AM
Very unique Bill - I like it!!
Agree that the composition would be enhanced with removal of top branch.

Mike Moats
02-15-2008, 06:26 PM
Hey Bill, another real nice idea. This is a real nice comp and interesting image, I would agree the top right branch isn't adding any thing, so to simplify the image I would clone it out.