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Marc Mol
11-06-2009, 12:49 AM
Heron sunset.
Godikwe Lagoon- Okavango Delta, Botswana. Sept 09
Wondering if it needs more canvas above the sun?
D3 500VR 1/2000s ISO200@f/4. From monopod and small boat.

C & C most welcome

Cheers
Marc

http://africaddict.smugmug.com/Nature/Botswana-Sept-2009/d313834i-leggey-edit1/704768185_WVmbf-XL.jpg

Harshad Barve
11-06-2009, 01:23 AM
lovely compo and great placement of sun and heron
I think toning down BG bit and smoothening will help to improve this a lot
TFS

Stu Bowie
11-06-2009, 02:02 AM
Marc, wonderful setting, and I like the comp. The silhouette of the heron looks good, and adding a slight bit of canvas at the top will work. Well captured.

Clement Francis
11-06-2009, 08:21 AM
Simple things in life are always charming this is one such example, great shot over all.

Raul Quinones
11-06-2009, 08:46 AM
Beautiful shot. I realize that composition are mainly dictate by personal taste, in my opinion a version with a little more room at the top and a portrait crop could work also.


Raul

Danny J Brown
11-06-2009, 08:58 AM
Hi Marc: This shot makes me feel good as sunset silhouettes can do. If the sun were a little less bright and the heron was more black I would love it even more. Thanks.

Daniel Cadieux
11-06-2009, 03:15 PM
I like the concept. I too would prefer a bit more room at top, and less at left. I'm wondering what caused all those arched rings in the sky to show as I've never noticed this in an image before?