Lox Sunset

[Harold Davis]

tried a "tiny landscape" last weekend out at loxahatchee nwr. any suggestions appreciated.

D300, 18-200 at 60mm, f/32, 1/1250s, -1.0EV, ISO 800

thanks for looking. comments and critiques much appreciated.

[Dave Mills]

Hi Harold, Beautiful light and a simple but interesting comp. If possible I would remove the green light on the left since IMO it brings too much attention to itself. Might also crop about a third off the bottom. Good eye Harold!

[david cramer]

Agree with Dave about the green. For me this would be more appealing if the sun were lower, behind the grasses.

[Roman Kurywczak]

Hey Harold,
Agree about the green....probably lens flare and VG advice given above.....would be interesting to see the sun behind/in a grass.....but I do like the placement here also. Try adding a bit of black in selective color.....will make the silhouettes darker. Nice job finding the tiny landscape!

[Robert Amoruso]

Harold,

Going with green removing and adding black as suggested is what you need. I like the sun placement here as well.