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Mike Robinson
10-28-2009, 01:10 PM
Shot on October 26 as a snow storm closed in on the Tetons. Fall color all gone. 8 vertical shots stitched in PS4.

Canon 5DM2
24-105L at 43mm
Iso 100
f22
1/12s
Lance Warley
10-28-2009, 04:34 PM
Beautiful job on the stitching and the crop, Mike.

I thought it could use a bit more processing, so I hit it with some Shad-Hi, Curves and Vibrance. I hope you don't mind.

I wish this was one of mine.
Marc Mol
10-28-2009, 06:39 PM
Great job Mike, with a magic reflection, sky & clouds. Like how the river leads you into the main scene.
With Lance's repost giving it that extra pop. Well done.
Ed Cordes
10-28-2009, 09:28 PM
Re post is better as it does have a bit more "pop". The choice of pano is excellent. Stitch is done very well. I also like the FG grass in the LRC. Good job.
Morkel Erasmus
10-29-2009, 05:00 AM
great pano and would look sweet hanging against a wall :)
Lance's repost has made it shine.
Dave Mills
10-29-2009, 08:35 AM
I also agree the repost kicked it up a notch. Good reflection along with the lighting. I might want to do something about the cloud on the far right since I find my eye drawing to it....
Roman Kurywczak
10-29-2009, 11:14 AM
Hey Mike,
Very nice use of a pano stitch and very nice use of leading lines. I agree with Dave on the far right cloud.....since I'd imagine the compression was huge on this.....you may want to tone that down first, along with some of the snow on the lit part of the Tetons.....before you pop the contrast boost.....which in Lance's post gave the extra boost to the oveall scene. These are minor tweaks and corrections to a very well composed and thought out scene!
Robert Amoruso
10-29-2009, 01:15 PM
Not much to add to the suggestions above. Well done on using a stitched pano to emphasis the composition with acts as one large leading line right to the BG. I too like the FG grass on the LR. Perhaps a bit more of them would have been nice, but all in all you have a winner here.
Mike Robinson
10-29-2009, 08:15 PM
Thanks for the excellent advice. I'll try the above and let you know what the print looks like.
Dennis "Curly" Buchner
10-29-2009, 09:20 PM
Nice job Mike, love the reflection and coolness of the image