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Jackie Schuknecht
10-14-2009, 10:08 AM
This is pretty much full frame. With some water cropped from the right for comp.
40D
ISO 400
100-400 @ 400
5.6
Tripod
BB @ -2
AV/ Evaluative
+ 1/13
Ran Topaz Denoise for NR
White Balanced in ACR
Sharpening
Had a reflection in the lower part of the eye, did some work on it to try to make it look more natural and a lot of beak clean-up.
Comments/Suggestions Appreciated
Thanks!

Daniel Cadieux
10-14-2009, 10:17 AM
Hi Jackie, I like the intimate close-up you've created here. Good job on the bill clean-up too. Great curve of the neck!! Comp-wise: I would crop from above to eliminate the triangle in ULC. It would solidify the top area, and would also make it seem like a deliberate cut above the head rather than looking accidentally clipped.

Harshad Barve
10-14-2009, 10:47 AM
lovely image with nice exposure
TFS

Kiran Poonacha
10-14-2009, 12:14 PM
Agree with DC on the crop, loved the expo and details here, congrats..

Nicki Gwynn Jones
10-14-2009, 01:15 PM
Hi Jackie,
Beautiful close-up and definitely agree with Daniel that a crop from the top would strengthen the comp. Love the water droplets!
Best,
Nicki

Ákos Lumnitzer
10-14-2009, 03:58 PM
Great work Jackie. I echo Dan's suggestion about crop. Looks odd this way. :)

Joerg Rockenberger
10-14-2009, 11:31 PM
Nice soft light, details and pose. +1 re the crop. JR