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Harshad Barve
10-07-2009, 10:29 AM
Dear All
Made this with D300, ISO 400, 18-55 at 18 mm, F8 near local waterbody

All C & C are most welcome and much appreciated
Harshad

Fabs Forns
10-07-2009, 01:07 PM
Spectacular and dramatic sky with great cloud formation. I would clone out the white spots and would like more grounding like including the tree base.

Bob Malbon
10-07-2009, 05:59 PM
Love it but dido on the few stars. Bob

Roman Kurywczak
10-08-2009, 03:14 PM
Hi Harshad,
For me moving the tree slightly to the left....more in the ROT position would make this stronger. I also agree on the stars as they are drawing the eye too much. Like Fabs I too may have wanted more base but it may have been too busy and uninteresting (judging by the left bottom branches).....so I would probably eliminate those branches too. Very nice colors and textures to the clouds.

Ramesh Adkoli
10-08-2009, 08:54 PM
What a dramatic sky, Harshad. Great silhouette of the tree too. Including some ground below the tree would help give the frame a base. Does it need a little CCW rotation? TFS.

regards,
ramesh

Morkel Erasmus
10-09-2009, 01:10 PM
lovely dramatic sky Harshad! Roman and Fabs have touched the main points - I also feel the clouds are bit oversharpened.

Robert Amoruso
10-10-2009, 08:52 AM
I like the diagonal of the clouds - always a strong composition technique. I liek the tree placement on the right as it stops to eye from going out of the frame as it follows the diagonal up. I am OK with the bottom crop as presented. I suggest cloning out the blurry stars.

Well done Harshad.

Harshad Barve
10-10-2009, 08:57 AM
here is repost
let me know how it looks now

Robert Amoruso
10-10-2009, 11:42 AM
Very nice w/o the stars.

Morkel Erasmus
10-11-2009, 08:21 AM
repost rocks Bhai.
did you get my PM?