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Roman Kurywczak
09-26-2009, 08:01 PM
Maybe it's my most recent Yellostone trip and lack of sleep or when I look up and see all those stars I do have a chance to reflect....my 2nd ever poem......maybe it's just the fact that I realized that I need glasses......not an easy day for a guy with 20/10 vision.
I did post this image in landscapes....but felt that it works with the words.
Life
I have lived
So I thought
Looking back
Few regrets
Certain answers
Life's miss-steps
Arrogant youth
Age reflects
Common foibles
Wisdom tempers
Lurking nightmares
Life's rewards
Final thoughts
Sincere beliefs
Lingering doubts
Peaceful yield
denise ippolito
09-26-2009, 08:08 PM
Roman, The image really helps deliver the words. Very thoughtfully done. I like the way you've made me feel as though I've walked in your shoes for a moment. Excellent!
Julie Kenward
09-27-2009, 08:30 AM
Roman, I love the last four lines of this poem. LOVE THEM. My goodness but this is good stuff for a beer drinking head banging guy's guy. ;):D;)
Lance Warley
09-27-2009, 09:19 AM
Your poem is a spiritual journey from many places, including discord, to a state of peaceful acceptance.
This image clearly means a lot to you, in more ways than one.
Beautifully done, Roman.
Are you sure you're from Jersey?
Grace Scalzo
09-28-2009, 07:12 PM
Wonderful, Roman. I like the progression.
James Shadle
09-29-2009, 08:02 PM
So there is a thinking man beneath that beer swilling exterior:).
Well said, killer image.
Roman Kurywczak
09-30-2009, 03:58 PM
So there is a thinking man beneath that beer swilling exterior:).
Well said, killer image.
He , he, he:D.....somtimes I like to surprise! Thanks all!
Ákos Lumnitzer
10-09-2009, 02:50 AM
I was quite taken aback myself by the depth of your beer. Err, poetry! ;) Exceptional piece Roman.
John Ippolito
12-14-2009, 03:01 PM
Roman, this is an incredible image, with some very thougtful lines. The words certainly have plenty of relevance for me. I too still have 20/10 vision for distance, but I now need those #$%@* readers for close work! Very nice work.
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