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Kerry Perkins
09-21-2009, 09:24 PM
Light falls from the sky
Like rain on summer mountains
Quenching their darkness

denise ippolito
09-22-2009, 06:27 AM
Kerry, You have a way with words! Simply lovely!!!

Lance Warley
09-22-2009, 07:01 AM
Excellent, Kerry!

If I read the haiku without looking at the image, a mental picture of the image would have been evoked for sure.

"Light falls from the sky like rain" <-- That's writing.

Kerry Perkins
09-22-2009, 10:50 PM
Thanks for your kind words Denise and Lance! Much appreciated.

Julie Kenward
09-23-2009, 07:26 AM
Excellent! Beautiful image and the words tell the story perfectly! It's a home run on both counts...

James Shadle
09-29-2009, 08:09 PM
A five seven five poem.
I love a really good haiku.
And I love this one.

Kerry Perkins
10-04-2009, 11:06 PM
A five seven five poem.
I love a really good haiku.
And I love this one.

:D That is an excellent reply, thank you!

Ákos Lumnitzer
10-09-2009, 02:49 AM
Well done Sir! A wonderful image to go with your great Haiku as well! :)

John Ippolito
12-14-2009, 02:55 PM
Beautifully written, Kerry-and your image is perfectly matched with the words. Very well done.

nancy hazen
01-13-2011, 12:32 AM
Stuning image, Kerry and beautiful words to match.
Nancy