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ashkan ojaghi
09-18-2009, 07:39 AM
Hi
This is My first post here in Avian forum .. i'm not sure about the Species but i think this is a Cetti's warbler ..captured in NW of iran
Hope you like it and comments are appreciated
30D -- Sigma 150-500 @500mm - f/8 -1/1000- ISO 400
http://aopix.persiangig.com/document/Wild%20things/_MG_6366cwredd.jpg

Daniel Cadieux
09-18-2009, 08:51 AM
Welcome to BPN Ashkan!

Although I'm finding the bird small in the frame I'm enjoying the garden setting you photographed it in. Perfect pose - I like the crossed primaries. I do find the BG, especially the OOF plant directly in front of the bird, a bit busy.

Keep them coming!

Michael Hogan
09-18-2009, 08:56 AM
I agree - a tighter crop removing the OOF bottom but leaving the nice background I think would improve the image. The lighting and colours are really nice

Michael

Phil Ertel
09-18-2009, 03:41 PM
The bird is very nice (pose, detail both very good). I agree with Daniel that the garden setting is pleasing. If it were mine I might crop a bit oFf the left (up to the flower about a third in) and some off the right ( up to the clump of flowers under the rear of the bird. If it is within our ethics I might see how the image is effected my removing the out of focus plant in front of the bird. Thanks for sharing.

Ramon M. Casares
09-19-2009, 05:42 PM
Love the nice comp, pose, detail and perch, species is nice as well as sharpness and color. If you can, try to brighten the shadowed ares in the BG, I am sure this will improve the BG a lot.
Congratulaitons!

ashkan ojaghi
09-21-2009, 12:17 AM
Hi
Thank you very much for your comments .. I wanted to include all of the blooms in the frame and did not crop it tighter but i tried it and this is the result:
http://aopix.persiangig.com/document/Wild%20things/_MG_6366cft.jpg