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Jackie Schuknecht
09-13-2009, 04:32 PM
Took this flat marker at a pioneer cemetery and did a zoom blur.
Full Frame.
40D
17-55
f22
ISO 100
1 sec
AV Mode +2/3 Evaluative
Comments Appreciated.

Gus Cobos
09-13-2009, 04:49 PM
Hi Lady Jackie,
I like it. I like the almost flat angle of capture, which adds to the drama...it looks like the spirit wants to come out and play...:D My suggestion would be to kick up the contrast and boost the saturation just a little, not too much...:cool:

Oscar Zangroniz
09-13-2009, 04:53 PM
Excellent blur Jackie. Love how the word stands out.
Congrats.

Harold Davis
09-13-2009, 05:40 PM
that's kinda spooky, jackie. you captured a feel by using that technique. nice job. i like it.

Fabs Forns
09-13-2009, 05:49 PM
Very nice zoom blur, Jackie, you could also try placing the center of the blue on a rule of thirds position.

Juan Carlos Vindas
09-13-2009, 07:49 PM
I also like it very much!
You are inspiring me to go out and try some of this. Great job.

Lance Peters
09-13-2009, 08:08 PM
Hmm Spooky - like it a lot!! A tad more contrast??
:)

Jeff Cashdollar
09-13-2009, 09:16 PM
Nice blur-image the effect came out well. Not sure about the grass in the corners, let's what others say. Agree with the contrast/sat boot to give the dead a little life.

Thanaboon Jearkjirm
09-13-2009, 11:08 PM
The grass on top right corner doesn't bother me as much as the leaf in the lower right corner. Feel kind of out of place. Very spooky indeed, your zoom blur really bring the word into focus, very excellent zoom technique. I also like the color of the stone, add to the mysterious and spooky feeling.

Jackie Schuknecht
09-14-2009, 01:21 PM
A little more black and vibrance added. hope this looks better.

Thanaboon Jearkjirm
09-14-2009, 01:32 PM
I do like the repost better, it bring out the word more. Well done.

Alfred Forns
09-14-2009, 02:46 PM
I like the word being brought out more prominent One interesting subject for the blur !!!

Kyle Marie Barcelos
09-16-2009, 09:40 AM
I like the re-post, nice blur, i have a thing for old grave stones:D