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david cramer
09-11-2009, 07:55 AM
D300 with 17-55 @ 46mm, f/22, 6 sec., iso 200, ev +0.67

http://davidwcramer.smugmug.com/photos/646046169_G5whd-O.jpg

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Roman Kurywczak
09-11-2009, 02:24 PM
Hey David,
Shapes and comp are very nice as always at the slots.....but never easy for sure!.......while the LH side being brighter adds depth and seperation to that side.....the keyhole brightness......because of location is a bit distracting. I think a tone down there will still keep seperation in the layers.....but bring it more in harmony with the rest! Still nicely composed and handled!

Robert Amoruso
09-13-2009, 07:27 AM
David,

Before reading Roman's comment on the bright section in the upper right, I felt the same.

Overall, I like how you chose to compose the image. Good flow of pattern to guide the viewers eye.

Jackie Schuknecht
09-14-2009, 01:50 PM
Hi David, I like the comp and as presented. Like that you have gotten the texture of the sandstone, and have not oversharpened it.

david cramer
09-15-2009, 06:33 AM
Your comments are appreciated. The image would benefit from toning down that bright area.