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Axel Hildebrandt
09-10-2009, 08:18 AM
I tried something different here since the perch is quite dominant but I liked the shape and the reflection of leaves in the BG that already turned yellow and red.

http://www.pbase.com/axelhi/image/116904823/original.jpg

1D3, 500f4, 1.4x, 1/200s, f/8, ISO 400

Kiran Poonacha
09-10-2009, 08:23 AM
Great setting here Axel Bhai.. beautiful bird, good pose, the perch and the plants add so well to this colourful frame... congrats..

Randy Stout
09-10-2009, 08:31 AM
Axel:

I like the concept a lot, lovely colors, very much a fall feeling.
My only observation would be that the LUC is so bright, that it draws the eye away from the bird and the rest of the scene.

I reduced the luminosity of that corner, which IMHO refocuses the eye onto the bird. There is so much detail, that I had to use a lot of compression to get the image downsized enough, but I think the idea comes across.

Do you have any with the bird perched higher on the stump?

Randy

Axel Hildebrandt
09-10-2009, 08:56 AM
Thanks, Randy! I think this version works, too. The bird moved further down to look for food after this.

Manos Papadomanolakis
09-10-2009, 10:48 AM
beautiful setting...I Iove the pose,perch and the colors!

Chris van Rooyen
09-10-2009, 10:50 AM
Great impact and atmosphere!. I like Randy's suggestion of reducing the luminosity in the corner.

Ramon M. Casares
09-10-2009, 10:55 AM
Lovely set and overall scene, great textures, pose, composition, detal, colors, light and sharpness. Loved it. COngratulaitons.
Ps: Repost does look better.

Stu Bowie
09-10-2009, 11:46 AM
Super comp, and with the heron nicely placed. Im glad you captured him where he was, as I feel lower down, you would have lost the impact in this. I like the foliage in the tree stump too.

Gal Shon
09-10-2009, 12:43 PM
The Perch and plants make it for me on this one.
I like the scene, setting, colors, sharpness and Comp.
The BG "steal" some attention, due to the bright spots.

Raymond Barlow
09-13-2009, 02:46 AM
very nice scene, the environment is very cool., I like Randy's work, and wonder if a flash was used?

Axel Hildebrandt
09-13-2009, 08:21 AM
very nice scene, the environment is very cool., I like Randy's work, and wonder if a flash was used?

Thanks, Ray! I didn't use flash, the catchlight is probably a reflection of the water.