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Fabs Forns
08-31-2009, 04:15 PM
Another take from the morning trip. Variduo Neutral density/polarizer used, vignette cropped.
Model: NIKON D3
Lens (mm): 24
ISO: 200
Aperture: 13
Shutter: 1/3
Exp. Comp.: -0.7

Roman Kurywczak
08-31-2009, 04:55 PM
Hi Fabs,
I liked the way you placed the 3 main puddles visually through the frame....very nicely done there!....I do think that you may need a bit more light on approx. 1/2 the ocean waves and perhaps even a bit into the bottom of the sky.....this may be due to the split ND.....but I feel I want it a hair lighter......now the last one is definitely a pesonal choice.....but for me the vignette frame doesn't work......may be because I used to get vignettes.... not on pupose.... with wide angle images from my polariser ....but the sky is so lovely that I would prefer it w/o it. Fla. is not the easiest place to compose landscapes......you have proven once again that it is possible and can be very well done!

Robert Amoruso
08-31-2009, 07:35 PM
I agree with Roman on this one Fabs. Great looking colors in the sky.

Michael Pancier
08-31-2009, 07:49 PM
was this the one with me or another trip?

Dennis "Curly" Buchner
08-31-2009, 07:50 PM
Very nice Fabs

Ed Cordes
08-31-2009, 08:46 PM
I really like the sky colors and how they are reflected in the pools. To my eye I would like just a tad more brightness in the FG rock - not much but just a bit more detail.

Kobus Tollig
09-01-2009, 06:08 AM
Super sky and ditto all Roman said. Great shot

Lance Warley
09-01-2009, 02:26 PM
Beautiful, Fabs.

The rich colors on the rocks and the water really make this shot special, and they complement the sky perfectly.

Fabs Forns
09-02-2009, 04:47 PM
Thanks for the feedback, guys.

Michael, this was the trip with you :)

Morkel Erasmus
09-11-2009, 01:06 AM
Fabs, almost missed this. Gorgeous sky and rich composition. Roman's points all resonate with me, especially wanting it a tad lighter and losing the vignette. Lovely shot nonetheless...