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Cindy Cone
08-30-2009, 09:36 AM
This is from late September last year. I've tried various crops, but can't decide which I like, so I thought I'd get some input here. This is full-frame. Thanks for looking.

Canon 40D
Canon 17-40mm at 35
1/200
f/16
ISO 400

Roman Kurywczak
08-30-2009, 02:06 PM
Hi Cindy,
You nailed the exposure and I like the placement of the Tetons with the ridge leading us to it and the cloud framing it in. When I saw this....immediately thought pano as the FG isn't as interesting even though the colors are sweet! Let me know what you think and let's see how others feel!

denise ippolito
08-30-2009, 02:27 PM
Cindy, I think this is lovely. The colors and the composition are very nice. As soon as I saw it I thought a bit off the bottom would help. But I would have only gone to the top of the dark area. Very nicely done.

David Kennedy
08-30-2009, 03:03 PM
I'd agree with Roman's crop. Possibly coming in from the right a bit would help clean up the edge. Great light and the clouds over the Tetons really "make" this image.

Jackie Schuknecht
08-30-2009, 05:40 PM
Lovely image Cindy, I am with D, and a crop just to the dark area. Love the gold and the simple elements make it strong compositionally for me.

Cindy Cone
08-30-2009, 05:52 PM
Thanks so much for all your comments and crop suggestions. I really like Roman's crop, and I think I like Dave's idea about cropping a little from the right. Although I'd try different versions, but none with as much of a pano, so I really appreciate all of the help.

David Thomasson
08-31-2009, 12:59 PM
I do like Roman's pano crop. Maybe blue up the wedge of sky?

http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/1110/tetons.jpg

Dennis "Curly" Buchner
08-31-2009, 07:54 PM
Very nice Cindy, like the way the mountains are composed in the photo

Cindy Cone
08-31-2009, 09:02 PM
Thanks, Curly and David. I appreciate your comments.

The blue does really "pop" in your rendition, David. Thanks for sharing that.