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Alfred Forns
08-17-2009, 10:24 PM
Trying to frame with bg rather than isolating

Comments welcome and much appreciated

Canon 1DMk2
180 macro
f 8.0 1/500
ISO 400
Av +2/3

Jeff Cashdollar
08-17-2009, 10:49 PM
Exposure and focus point are spot-on. Nice HA and catch-light in eye. Only wish both antenna were up (thats a joke - ha, ha). Great close-up, well done.

Beep-Out

Alfred Forns
08-17-2009, 11:12 PM
... good one Beep Might think strange but I do look for antenna and leg positions :) .. don't always get them and particularly try with flies !!!

Thanaboon Jearkjirm
08-18-2009, 12:30 AM
The bee is very sharp with great details. I like the pose of the bee doing its daily routine. Also like the flower in the background, help telling more about the environment.

Desmond Chan
08-18-2009, 01:37 AM
Agree with the details and exposure. I would be tempted to do something to the flower in the background though (I'm not saying to get rid of it). The bee just looks so good !

Alfred Forns
08-18-2009, 03:59 PM
Hi Desmond Not sure what else could be done to the flower but basically it is the entire basis for the image. I got lots of bees on flowers and trying incorporating the surroundings.

If you got suggestions let me know but all I was trying for was enough dof for the fly and be able to blur the flower.

Lance Peters
08-18-2009, 04:24 PM
Mighty Impressive bee - tack sharp - Like the composition - BG flower doesnt bother me - fell it adds to the image.

Harold Davis
08-18-2009, 05:05 PM
i like it i like it i like it! the duo toned bg is sweeeet. the framing from the bg flower is a great idea. i was trying the same thing with some bfs. will post later. gotta work on em! the fancy shadow box frame actually adds to this.

Gus Cobos
08-18-2009, 05:23 PM
This is one sweet image Mr. Forns...I like it as presented...well done....:cool:

Ron Boisvert
08-18-2009, 06:54 PM
Hi Alfred, I love the detail in the bee and the sharp flower stem, and often prefer more complex images with a complementary background subject like your second flower. The smooth background and colors send it over the top for me. I really like your image a lot!! Maybe you and Fabs will have to become Avian/BugScapes or something like that. Your bug images are very special in my opinion. Thanks for sharing them!! I can't wait to see the next one.

Alfred Forns
08-18-2009, 07:40 PM
... I like that Ron Bugscapes.com :)

Richard Waas
08-18-2009, 08:22 PM
Great job Al. I like the background flower. Also like the framing, I never think of that..... Congrats Mr. Bugscape

Bob Miller
08-19-2009, 01:06 PM
really love the bee sharpness and the bg flower doesn't bother me at all...it acts as a nice repeating shape

Jackie Schuknecht
08-20-2009, 11:19 AM
Really sharp. Love the BG too Al.