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OvidiuCavasdan
08-17-2009, 04:22 PM
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k71/COV_2006/InsideHibiscusNewR1_1.jpg

40D, EF 100mm f2.8 Macro
f/13
1/50 sec
ISO 400
Manual mode, tripod.

Liked the shapes and colors inside this hibiscus flower.
Tried something different -without stamens in the frame and the staminal column gradually oof.
Any comments and suggestions are welcome.

Gus Cobos
08-17-2009, 04:57 PM
Hi Ovidiu,
I like the composition and capture, the center of your flower is placed just right in frame. I like the texture and the soft flowing lines of the petals...my recommendation would be to boost the saturation and contrast just a little, to make your beautiful lady come alive...:cool:

Alfred Forns
08-17-2009, 05:25 PM
Agree on the sat boost Lovely image and well composed Particularly like the feel !!!

Cheryl Slechta
08-17-2009, 05:31 PM
Ovidiu, this is beautiful! I also love the lines radiating out from the center and I like the placement. Great job!

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Cheryl

Connie Mier
08-17-2009, 05:57 PM
Gus and Alfred already said it, a bit more contrast to this already lovely shot would improve it. Beautifully composed.

Nick Palmieri
08-17-2009, 07:27 PM
Love the colors. real nice composition.

Christopher Miller
08-17-2009, 08:02 PM
Love your colors and composition, Ovidiu! Very nice and agree on adding a little more contrast and saturation.

Jeff Cashdollar
08-17-2009, 10:23 PM
Good advise given and I like it as presented too, now that is a close up!

Lance Peters
08-18-2009, 01:00 AM
Lovely - agree with the advice already given - has a nice feel to it as well :)

Bob Miller
08-18-2009, 11:44 PM
Hi! Saturation looks fine to me! I think I would try darkening the edges all the way around to pull the eye inward toward the center of your beautiful composition. Well done!

OvidiuCavasdan
08-19-2009, 12:36 AM
Thank you for comments and suggestion.
Version#2:

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k71/COV_2006/InsideHibiscusNewR1_1SC.jpg

Christopher Miller
08-21-2009, 08:08 AM
Much better, Ovidiu! Well done!