View Full Version : Pied Kingfisher(male)
Luis Valadao
08-17-2009, 09:14 AM
here is my first post on BPN, been shooting for just under a year. I am really eager to learn and get my shots up to the standards of the other Photograpers here. all comments and suggestions welcome. many thanks.
ISO: 400
f-stop: f/8
SS: 1/1000sec
camera: sony a100
lens: sigma 50-500 @500mm
http://i1018.photobucket.com/albums/af308/luisv_photo/PKPerchCLPLB.jpg
Daniel Cadieux
08-17-2009, 11:27 AM
Welcome to BPN Luis...looks like we have another bird photographer to add to the already strong South African contingent! Nice looking kingfisher - looks like you were close it! I like the quite relaxed pose it offered you here. I would have been OK with all the space if either the perch had been all across the frame or if the bill had pointed directly at left, but as is I feel a significant crop at left would strenghten the comp. I know it is not always possible, but try to keep the sun directly behind you (notice the strong shadow at left of the bird caused by the sun being a bit to your right.)
Overall a strong effort, here's hoping to see more from you! :-)
Aidan Briggs
08-17-2009, 11:50 AM
Welcome to BPN! Daniel made some good points here, and if you had moved to your right (if it was possible) the light angle would have been a bit better.
Looking forward to more!
Luis Valadao
08-17-2009, 11:56 AM
thank you Daniel and Aidan, i will pay more attention to where the light is next time. thanks for taking the time to look and comment.
Chris Kotze
08-17-2009, 12:29 PM
Welcome Luis. Great pose detail. Ditto comments.
Stu Bowie
08-17-2009, 01:03 PM
Welcome to BPN Luis, and a great subject to enter with. Dan has covered everything, but I may add that there is a strong magents cast in this.
Austin Thomas
08-17-2009, 02:55 PM
Welcome Luis,
I agree with the advise above and a great first post.
Austin
arash_hazeghi
08-18-2009, 04:39 PM
Welcome, nice first post and ditto Dan's comments.
Morkel Erasmus
08-18-2009, 04:57 PM
welcome Luis! :)
light noted, but otherwise a high-detail portrait, I love that the eye is also detailed. I also noted the magenta cast - easily corrected.
keep them coming!
Ákos Lumnitzer
08-18-2009, 07:33 PM
Unfortunately I cannot access your photobucket link from work, but judging from that thumbnail, the KF is a bit too close to the right side of the image. I'll have a better look later from home.
Luis Valadao
08-19-2009, 12:46 AM
thanks for viewing and comments guys, many thanks:>
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