Team effort

[Ákos Lumnitzer]

Image by the one and only Denise and words by yours truly.



Mist floats in the woods
Yet not a soul stirs
Those howling gales
Are so cold it hurts

I hear a scream far away
Or did someone yell
It's drifting toward me
This creature from he11

What did it come for
What is its purpose
Why did it pick me
Out from a distance

I feel drops of rain
They fall from the sky
His claws inflict pain
As I exhale my cry

My blood's spurting out
My body drains fast
I wonder how long
Have I got to last

Awakened, I'm sweating
I shake like a leaf
My journey to he11
Was ever so brief

A lesson well learned
This all has to stop
My obsession with
Adobe Photoshop

[denise ippolito]

Akos, I think the words are fantastic! I love the line-"As I exhale my cry". You got a chuckle out of me at the end. Well done.

[Ákos Lumnitzer]

You spend way too much time in the realms of Photoshop young lady. It was a tongue-in-cheek reminder. :p

In all honesty though. I love the work you do. Very creative and inspiring for everyone to see. :)

[denise ippolito]

Akos, You are probably right.:)

[Ákos Lumnitzer]

I am joking. I do have a lot of admiration for all the wonderful work you do. I am just a cheeky fella! So feel free to send a kick my way! :)

[Lance Warley]

WOW! Great teamwork!!!!

And the fun you're having doing it comes through loud and clear.

[Julie Kenward]

Pretty funny Akos! One line at the end "Awaken, I'm sweating" I'd change that to be "Awakened, I'm sweating..." Other than that...hysterical ending!

[Ákos Lumnitzer]

Thanks folks. Julie, that's probably what I wanted to say. Thanks. Corrected. Funny, English is my second language and what I tell people in Australia that ask about my background (hence my name) that I am an import just like the Indian Myna (a horrible introduced bird species) but not as nasty. :D