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Erik Anderson
08-15-2009, 10:58 PM
Olympus 510 70-300@ 231mm, f5.6, 1/1000, ISO 200

Julie Kenward
08-16-2009, 08:42 AM
Erik, it looks like you have a very nice image here. It would be helpful if you gave us a larger image to view so we could really get in and see the details.

As is, I think it could use a slight CCW rotation to get the stem straight up and down and a little more room around the edges would also be nice. You've got some beautiful blue lighting in the BG - when it's that nice, show it off! Give it some room to dance around your subject!

I also think a little more of the stem included would help balance the frame as well.

You got very nice details out of the entire flower (from what I can see at this size).

Ed Vatza
08-16-2009, 04:34 PM
Yes, a larger image would help a lot. My biggest "problem" is that it is too tight all the way around. I would like to see a bit more breathing room on all sides.