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denise ippolito
08-14-2009, 10:11 AM
I head out long and far
Roaming the night
Alert and ready
My eyes don't lose sight

I am on the hunt
For my next attack
Panning through the prey
Then I'll just sit back

I'll wait for a young one
To wander near
Moving in slowly
When the coast is clear

I'll make it back to my cubs
In the den
Soon enough it will be time
Once again


I added a cartoon effect to the image to make the words seem less harsh.

Julie Kenward
08-14-2009, 02:42 PM
Nice effect, Denise. It really adds to the drama of the poem as well.

Ákos Lumnitzer
08-14-2009, 05:31 PM
Love the pic and your words are well composed.

Harshad Barve
08-16-2009, 10:10 AM
hey Denise
You made my evening here , I am a Tiger fanatic
TFS

denise ippolito
08-16-2009, 10:23 AM
Thanks Julie, Akos and Harshad-I appreciate the support.
Harshad, I am glad you are a tiger fanatic. I love the large cats myself!!:)

Lance Warley
08-17-2009, 01:39 PM
Beautifully written, Denise.

For whatever reason, I thought the words were natural, not harsh. Circle of Life stuff.

denise ippolito
08-17-2009, 05:15 PM
Lance, Thankyou for your kind words.