As One

[denise ippolito]

Surrender deep within your soul
The need to just be free
Becoming one with only some
Of who you used to be

Expand your thoughts to cover his
And they should merge as one
Rebuild a life together
While replacing what you've done

Change the course of your own fate
And unite together as one
Keep a tight hold of your own dreams
Your days on Earth aren't done

[Ákos Lumnitzer]

Very nicely written. :) Neat pic too.

[Dave Mills]

Thoughts well stated along with an interesting and effective image.

[denise ippolito]

Thankyou both for your kind words.

[Ákos Lumnitzer]

Just out of curiosity, what is the image of? A flower?

[denise ippolito]

Akos, It is a Red Dracaena Marginata Plant that I did a quad-flip on and then added an equalize.

[Lance Warley]

This is so positive.

Definitely a Rebirth/Empowerment poem.

Beautiful, Denise.

[denise ippolito]

Thankyou Lance. I appreciate the support.

[Julie Kenward]

Beautiful photo and words, Denise. Only place I tripped was on the line, "Change the course of your fate" but that could easily fit back into the cadence of the others with the addition of "Change the course of your own fate".

Lovely imagery here. This would make a great Wedding greeting card (*hint*hint*)

[denise ippolito]

Thanks Julie, I fixed it! I appreciate it!!:)