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Harshad Barve
08-02-2009, 08:53 AM
Dear All
Made this image witn D300, 600mm, ISO 400, 1/100 at F4
all critiques and commnets are welcome and much appreciated
Harshad

Morkel Erasmus
08-02-2009, 09:07 AM
beautiful exposure and BG, Harshad...pops nicely.
love that eye. I would consider cloning out the leaves - if not the large branch then at least the one in bottom right.

in our country they are considered pests because they chase all the indigenous birds from their food sources. :)

Harshad Barve
08-02-2009, 09:11 AM
Same here Morkel, they will chase all small birds

Rohan Kamath
08-02-2009, 09:21 AM
http://photos-f.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs155.snc1/5776_255329585104_908820104_7983989_5667722_n.jpg

A little crop behind the bird worked better as a composition for me. And also the leaves were a little distracting so removed them. Everything else is awesome, the exposure, eye contact, BG are bang on.

Harshad Barve
08-02-2009, 09:26 AM
Thanks for the efforts Rohan

Gene Potter
08-02-2009, 09:30 AM
Beautiful shot. Great focus and background. I like what Rohan did with the cloning, but a little clone outline is noticeable under the tale. Maybe some blur tool would smooth it out.

Doug Brown
08-02-2009, 09:37 AM
Hi Harshad. Good looking bird with excellent sharpness and nice detail in the blacks. I don't mind the upper vegetation but I would remove the single leaf at the bottom of the frame. I also think the bird is too centered and would move it to the left. I would have liked to see a slight head turn towards you, but the profile also works nicely.

Harshad Barve
08-02-2009, 09:53 AM
I agree with you Doug and here is repost , How it looks now ?

Doug Brown
08-02-2009, 10:05 AM
Much better Harshad!

Mital Patel
08-02-2009, 10:20 AM
fantastic shot sir ji

Harold Davis
08-02-2009, 10:32 AM
harshad, the repost is fantastic. i love this bird. the eye is different and really neat. you did well on all aspects. bird really pops in the nice light!

Stu Bowie
08-02-2009, 10:48 AM
Excellent detail captured Harshad, and pin sharp too. Great BG, and your repost is much better. Well done.

David Fletcher
08-02-2009, 11:41 AM
Cracking shot Harshad Bhai! Love the repost. Glad you left the leaves, and have to ask how you find the 600. (I'm using the 500 AF-S II and oft look at the 600 wishfully). Good work! Meant to say, what a wonderful eye this bird has.

Kiran Poonacha
08-02-2009, 11:52 AM
Beautiful one Harshad.. loved the repost, looks clean with great details... congrats..

denise ippolito
08-02-2009, 12:39 PM
Harshad, I love the details. I wish the foot wasn't clipped in the repost-but do agree w/ vegetation. Nicely done.

Harshad Barve
08-02-2009, 12:46 PM
Agree with you Denise
How it looks now ?
Harshad

denise ippolito
08-02-2009, 12:53 PM
Harshad, I like the inclusion of the foot much better!!

sree.kumar.h
08-02-2009, 01:39 PM
Fantastic details Harshad. The eye of the birds make the image for me.

Dr.Pranay Rao Juvvadi
08-02-2009, 02:41 PM
I don't mind the leaves. Your last repost is really nice.

Raymond Barlow
08-02-2009, 08:49 PM
very well done.. killer light and pose.

Marc Mol
08-02-2009, 09:38 PM
beautiful exposure and BG, Harshad...pops nicely.
love that eye. I would consider cloning out the leaves - if not the large branch then at least the one in bottom right.

in our country they are considered pests because they chase all the indigenous birds from their food sources. :)

Nice exposure & comp Harshad.
Agree with Morkel here, they are a REAL PEST here in OZ as well driving out all native species!

Cheers
Marc

Ákos Lumnitzer
08-02-2009, 10:18 PM
Brother Harshad,
You make a PITA bird look beautiful in fact. The second repost where we can see the foot is much better. I prefer to see some foliage as opposed to a clinically clean BG.

Congrats Bhai! :)

Dave Barnes
08-03-2009, 12:52 AM
Very well exposed, love the feather detail and the BG. Pity about the leaves.
They are a major problem here in RSA and have spread like wild fire from the coast, inland.

Harshad Barve
08-03-2009, 12:55 AM
Agreed Dave , they are spread like VANAVA ( Wild fire ) here to and now a days they became major destroyers of small bird nests