PDA

View Full Version : Maribou Stork



Ken Watkins
08-02-2009, 04:47 AM
Taken in Hwange National Park, Zimbabwe, 22nd June 2009

It was flying down

EOS 1D MkIII

500mm F4 IS hand-held

F8, ISO400, 1/2500

Ryan Lambert
08-02-2009, 05:47 AM
Good capture here Ken, Good feather detail, sharpness and angle of flight, the comp looks a bit too centered, maybe a tad off the right and top and add a bit to the left...

Keith Carver
08-02-2009, 05:49 AM
Nice lighting and EXP, Ken. I like the downward diagonal COMP; subtracting some canvas on the RHS might help, even if it produces a square frame. Wish the rear wing were more distinct. Sharpness looks good - you did well handholding that 500 mm!

Morkel Erasmus
08-02-2009, 06:02 AM
great exposure and unusual angle here Ken. pin sharp too. I would even consider adding more space in front.

Stu Bowie
08-02-2009, 06:18 AM
Excellent exposure and detail captured in this Ken. Sharp, and I would move him to the right.

Loukie Viljoen
08-02-2009, 08:09 AM
Nice one Ken one must be carefull not to have your image in the "bulls eye", ie draw diagonals from the corner to corner and avaoid the intersection if possible.

Harshad Barve
08-02-2009, 08:49 AM
All good points covered and agreed
Great pose and nice details
TFS

Kiran Poonacha
08-02-2009, 12:45 PM
Lovely pose, Head position is well synthed with the wing position and lovely details too... I am not too sure of the comp.. still a wonderful image.. congrats...

Dave Barnes
08-03-2009, 01:01 AM
These guys are ugly. Nice capture Ken,
I would still like to capture one of these guys in the air. Good feather detail in the dark and light feathers. Have you tried a portrait crop?

Ken Watkins
08-03-2009, 01:25 AM
Thanks for all the comments, yes they are ugly you should see their chicks even worse.

I had great difficulty in deciding a position within the frame, so posted it roughly off-centre. I have plenty of sky in the original, is the general consensus that I should add more to the left?

Ákos Lumnitzer
08-03-2009, 02:06 AM
Great pose Ken. Agreed with expanding canvas in front. So sharp too! :)

Ken Watkins
08-03-2009, 04:40 AM
Here is a resize, which I have to admit looks a lot better. Thanks for the advice.