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Harshad Barve
07-28-2009, 10:42 AM
Dear all
Made with D300, 600MM, 1/500, F5.6, ISO 800, NR used
All commnets and Crits welcome and appreciated
Harshad

Randy Stout
07-28-2009, 10:50 AM
Harshad:

Very handsome bird, and the soft light helped this difficult to expose combination of yellow/white and dark gray.

As posted, there are some hot areas through out the yellows and some of the whites. The detail is still pretty good, so just a minor adjustment of the highlight slider or lowering the overall contrast a bit would do it.

Great HA.

From a comp standpoint, I might be tempted to crop off 40% of the free space above, and add a bit to the right!

Thanks for sharing.

Randy

Harshad Barve
07-28-2009, 11:03 AM
Randy

Just a quick crop , how it looks now, I have some space in right,

Harshad

Randy Stout
07-28-2009, 11:07 AM
Harshad:

The crop down from above looks better. I mispoke about the other side, I really meant you need to add more space to the left. Sorry! My fault. He really needs a little more space to stare into!

Cheers

Randy

Raymond Barlow
07-28-2009, 11:20 AM
beautiful image Harshad, I like Randy's comments., and suggest a lower iso for better details, and less noise.

Rohan Kamath
07-28-2009, 11:59 AM
Very nicely exposed...I like the details maintained in the conditions and light...

Stu Bowie
07-28-2009, 02:01 PM
Harshad, Super pose, and I like the colours in this. The yellows do look a bit hot on the head, but easily fixed. Your repost is much better. Well done.

DarrenMcKenna
07-28-2009, 05:11 PM
A very nice image, yellows look fine here.




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Ramon M. Casares
07-29-2009, 12:19 AM
I like the OP better. Nice pose, GREAT DOF, nice soft light and species. Congratulations!