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Grace Scalzo
07-27-2009, 08:27 PM
You gave me such terrific suggestions on my last post, here's an attempt to implement them. I chose a slightly different pose, I like this one with the slightly more open wings and beak. Then I copied part of the sandcastle from another image in this series, and worked to tone down the brights and show more detail, and lighten the face area. I did no work to the sand in front of the bird, that's the way it looked, but maybe I should?
Thank to all who offered help and comments.
1/1600, f 5.6, iso400 (Incident metered)
Canon mk3 (borrowed!), 500 f4 + 1.4tc + tripopd
Ákos Lumnitzer
07-27-2009, 08:38 PM
Absolutely superb image Grace. I am blown away. Incredible! Maybe sharpen the eye just a tiny bit more. Thanks for sharing. :)
Sinh Nhut Nguyen
07-27-2009, 08:39 PM
I like it as is, the crop works well for me. Exposure is spot on.
Doug Brown
07-27-2009, 08:48 PM
Works for me as presented Grace! Awesome wing position and great eye contact. Beautiful light. Very nice!
Mike Veltri
07-27-2009, 09:02 PM
Love the wing stretch and details with lovely light Grace.
Fabs Forns
07-27-2009, 10:19 PM
Great pose and light, Grace. A pet peeve of mine is the terns wing tips capitalizing in all the sharpening. I would sharpen the head some more and mask out the sharpening in the wing tips, especially the left wing. As presented, it's sharper than the head.
Raymond Barlow
07-27-2009, 10:37 PM
this looks so much better Grace! well done.
Stu Bowie
07-28-2009, 12:08 AM
With more at the bottom, this is much better than your previous post. Great show of the extended wings, well exposed and sharp. Well captured Grace.
Dave Barnes
07-28-2009, 12:29 AM
Very good PP Grace, I think it works. I would like a bit more space above the bird.
Very good detail on the lighter feathers.
Kiran Poonacha
07-28-2009, 04:18 AM
Lovely image.. loved the pose very much and good details too.. congrats..
Chris Kotze
07-28-2009, 07:08 AM
Super detail and pose. Sharp and well exposed
Ramon M. Casares
07-28-2009, 10:54 AM
Very nice again, but agree with Fabs, altough in stead of sharpening the head more, I would apply less sharpening to the white lines of the primary feathers.
Congratulaitons.
Juan Aragonés
07-29-2009, 07:54 AM
Grace it works for me, the whites are much better than in the previous image :-)
Charles Glatzer
07-29-2009, 09:27 AM
Grace,
Way to go, and nice job on the exposure ;).
Chas
Nagesh Mula
07-29-2009, 01:10 PM
Hi Grace, its a terrific image and spot on. I've been trying to take this particular pose since a long time but not sucessful yet. Well captured without blowing up highlights and the angle here is perfect showing both the upside and downside of the plumage. Congrats!!
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