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David Roach
07-26-2009, 08:13 AM
No better place to be! Created early yesterday morning on Ft Myers beach.
1DMKIIN 400DO ISO 400 F8@1/1000
Juan Aragonés
07-26-2009, 08:20 AM
Composition, light and perspective works very nicely for me David. the closed eye makes a very nice mood in this image.
Keith Carver
07-26-2009, 09:59 AM
Nice low-angle shot and lovely soft BG. I also like the closed eye pose. Looks like the head is slightly oversharpened. Adding more canvas to right and subtracting from left might improve COMP.
Stu Bowie
07-26-2009, 11:52 AM
David, lovely lazy pose, and I like the soft light and colours. Comp wise, I would crop off at the bottom, just below the sandbank, and add a bit to the LHS.
Daniel Cadieux
07-26-2009, 12:29 PM
I like the pose and low angle but would definitely crop from bottom to eliminate the reflected head (about halfway between reflection and feet). A refelction that is split away from the main subject just rarely ever brings anything more to an image. I like how you captured the feather still caught in the bill - very nicely timed :-)
DarrenMcKenna
07-26-2009, 04:58 PM
Wonderful image David, I like the relaxed pose and low angle. I like the crop suggestion as well.
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Ramon M. Casares
07-26-2009, 06:08 PM
I wouldn't have kept the reflection. Light and pose are nice as exposure and detail. Congratulaitons!
sree.kumar.h
07-28-2009, 01:08 PM
I too feel the image has a greater impact without the relection. Like your compostion.
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