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Bill Foxworthy
07-24-2009, 09:09 AM
My first post again after being off a while. This was taken at Myakka River State Park earlier this year.
1/125, f/5.6, ISO 400, monopod with a 100-400 L lens at 400mm, early am, 8:30ish
Canon 50D or 5D MKII cant find the original file
Hope you like it!

Axel Hildebrandt
07-24-2009, 09:11 AM
Very nice portrait, I like the soft light, eye contact and BG. Maybe a bit more sharpening and a slight contrast boost? Good to see you posting again.

Bill Foxworthy
07-24-2009, 09:12 AM
Thanks Alex, I saw that after posting. Forgot to upload. I am too rusty I guess. :)

Manos Papadomanolakis
07-24-2009, 09:18 AM
beautiful bg`s color,light and pose!!!

Kiran Poonacha
07-24-2009, 09:42 AM
Lovely portrait this, great HA, details and light.. yeah sure does need some sharping and level adjustments.

Bill Foxworthy
07-24-2009, 09:44 AM
Thanks guys, does look like I lost some sharpness. Probably from re-working again too many times from the original. This has won a couple of times on POTD sites. I appreciate your thoughts. :)

Keith Carver
07-24-2009, 09:56 AM
Great pose, beautiful BG colors. Head front sharpness seems OK to me although I agree a little contrast tweak would help. Nice post, Bill.

Kaustubh Deshpande
07-24-2009, 10:18 AM
Loved the way the texture is captued here. Nice head angle. I suspect there is a slight camera shake. With a monopod and f-length 400mm, I wud have gone with a higher ISO and then NR on the BG.

KD

Daniel Cadieux
07-24-2009, 11:05 AM
Hey Bill! Good comp, and a nice head turn. I like the BG colours. The suggested tweaks should definitely be implemented. I would probably darken the darker part of the pupil too. Or those small water drops or dust particles on the plumage?

Hugh J McLaughlin
07-24-2009, 11:21 AM
NIce portrait that will be enhanced by the previously mentioned critiques.

Bill Foxworthy
07-24-2009, 11:22 AM
Hi Keith, Kaustubh and Daniel, thanks. This was an early morning image and it was already hot in Florida. The spots are dust or Dandruff of some kind. Natural to the bird, I guess. :)

Herb Houghton
07-24-2009, 11:28 AM
Nice pose and composition, I agree with the previous suggestions related to sharpening and levels adj or possibly less of a crop to increase the clarity.
Herb

Ramon M. Casares
07-24-2009, 11:58 AM
IMO it could go darker and some USM would also help, nice portrait thogh.
Congratulations!

Bill Foxworthy
07-24-2009, 01:59 PM
Here is the original image that I did up. I may have lost detail on a re-size. Maybe not though! Let me know if Better, same or worse.
Thanks
Bill

Keith Carver
07-24-2009, 02:30 PM
Here is the original image that I did up. I may have lost detail on a re-size. Maybe not though! Let me know if Better, same or worse.
Thanks
Bill I like the original image better - better feather detail.