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denise ippolito
07-20-2009, 06:58 AM
There's a place inside my mind
With thoughts of you held in time

Off white poppies everywhere
Your scent follows in the air

Flowing streams of colored lights
Fill my days and wake my nights

Reaching out and changing hues
Close my shades to block the views

Spinning circles all around
Ravens call without a sound

Bring me to another place
Far away and into space

I drift through waves of milky white
And lift my arms to take flight

Falling down and spinning round
I know now I'm on the ground

Wake my eyes it isn't you
Lay back down and start anew

Ákos Lumnitzer
07-20-2009, 07:17 AM
This is wonderful. I love it. Great words and fitting image. I admire the treatment you gave the poppy in that pic. Looks fantastic that way. So creative. I shall go and hide now. :)

Lance Warley
07-20-2009, 08:50 AM
Really nice mix of otherworld and this world, Denise.

denise ippolito
07-20-2009, 09:00 AM
Thankyou Akos and Lance. I appreciate your thoughts.

Doug Brown
07-20-2009, 10:00 AM
I don't venture here very often, but that's impressive Denise!

denise ippolito
07-20-2009, 02:46 PM
Doug, Thankyou for your kind words, they are much appreciated.

Julie Kenward
07-20-2009, 09:36 PM
Neat image, Denise. I have to say you carry me away with your words every time. I get all wrapped into the cadence of them and want to keep skipping along...

denise ippolito
07-20-2009, 09:41 PM
Thankyou Julie, much appreciated.