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Gal Shon
07-18-2009, 09:08 AM
~ 95% of the original, 20D 400/f5.6
Iso 200, f6.3, 1/500, -0.67
Feel free to comment and thanks for looking

Brian Barcelos
07-18-2009, 09:14 AM
Lovely image Gal, Nice warm lighting, BG and sharp. I might take some canas away from the right side, too much empty space IMO. Congrats.

Brian

Axel Hildebrandt
07-18-2009, 09:15 AM
I like the angle, pose, exposure control, sharpness and complementing BG. I might lighten the eye and crop a tad off the right.

Jim Buescher
07-18-2009, 09:29 AM
Nice shot. The complimentary BG is great, as is the bird's pose. I like the inquisitive stare, it leads you right to your signature. I would maybe clean up the whitewash on top of the perch and clone out the protruding stick below the bird.

Jim

Lorant Voros
07-18-2009, 09:44 AM
Nicely composed image. Agree with the above said. My suggestion would be to place the bird a little higher. Congratulations.

Gal Shon
07-18-2009, 09:44 AM
clone out the protruding stick below the bird.
Thank you for that, now that I see it, it shouldn't be there...

Juan Aragonés
07-18-2009, 11:42 AM
Superb light and BG. I like a lot the empty room at the right but would prefer the bird placed more at the left upper corner.

Stu Bowie
07-18-2009, 12:39 PM
Gal, super angled pose, and this is really sharp. Good detail, and I like the overall colours in this.

Ramon M. Casares
07-18-2009, 04:43 PM
I agree that the bird higher in the frame would improve comp, but the rest IMO, is simply superb! Great light, great pose, lovely BG, nice perch and detail.Congratulations.

Simon Bennett
07-18-2009, 04:57 PM
Lovely crisp image and smooth background.

Ryan Lambert
07-18-2009, 11:26 PM
Nice sharp image with good colour and BG, I think you could have placed the subject a bit more to the right, you may have been able to get away with it due to the head/body angle, although I do like the space you have kept...

Diego Torrentes
07-19-2009, 10:32 AM
Hi Gal:

I like the pose, the light, the BG and even the almost 3D look of the rock on the left. Great image. Although I'd like to see the bird a little more on the right.

Cheers,

Ákos Lumnitzer
07-19-2009, 03:55 PM
This looks great Gal! I love the tonalities very much. If you have room for a vertical crop from the original RAW file, I would suggest that. it would look fab!