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Lorant Voros
07-17-2009, 07:46 PM
http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/8999/songsparrow6bpn.jpg

Here is another image of the Song Sparrow in the one legged pose. Cropped to vertical, used NR and I darkened the perch (that is what I failed to do properly on the first post). Let me know what you think.

1dMKIII
500mm f:4 +1.4TC
ISO 800
f:7.1
1/640
handheld

Ramon M. Casares
07-17-2009, 08:55 PM
The pose is funny but it doesn't really show the species characterisitcs, I like the previous one better to be honest.
Nice light, BG, perch and comp though, although IMO, the bird could go a bit higher in the frame.
Congratulations.

Ákos Lumnitzer
07-17-2009, 10:53 PM
I like this different perspective Lorant (bocs, nincs ekezet a szamitogepes terminalnal) :D What I like is the pose and the BG, though I feel the space above could lose about half? What do you think?

Juan Aragonés
07-18-2009, 12:50 AM
I like the matching of colour and texture between the bird and the perch and the Bg grren color. The colour temperature seems to be a bit on the cold side of the spectrum and the Bg would be improved with a round of noise reduction

David Fletcher
07-18-2009, 02:44 AM
Like the pose and agree some top could be lost. Like the suggestion of nr on the bg. To me, it looks like you applied nr on the bird though, as the feather detail looks smoothed.

Axel Hildebrandt
07-18-2009, 11:05 AM
I like the pose, perch, eye contact and BG and agree regarding raising the color temperature a few degrees.