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Connie Mier
07-17-2009, 05:05 PM
Thanks to all who provided feedback on a previous post of mine, I went back and made some changes including rotation, increased temperature, gradient filter and darkening the bird. I also chose to place the bird in the upper corner, as a couple people suggested. Hope you enjoy this improvement.
Sony a700, 70-400mm Sony f4/5.6
1/2000, f5.6, ISO400
Connie

Fabs Forns
07-17-2009, 05:09 PM
Much stronger composition and presentation, Connie, congratulations!

Ákos Lumnitzer
07-17-2009, 05:27 PM
It is simply fabulous Connie. Well done on the reassessment and effort; the result speaks louder than words. Thanks for sharing. :)

Hugh J McLaughlin
07-17-2009, 06:12 PM
Seems as if got some good advice, which was followed to great effect.

Alfred Forns
07-17-2009, 06:45 PM
Well done Connie !! Very sweet Love all the changes Got a wall hanger !!! Big Congrats !!!

Ryan Lambert
07-18-2009, 12:26 AM
The comp change makes all the difference, congrats here

Juan Aragonés
07-18-2009, 12:48 AM
Connie I missed the original post but this one is just superb. Everything works very smoothly in this composition. I love the simplicity of composition, the nice soft orange and the action. Very good job

David Fletcher
07-18-2009, 02:51 AM
Well done Connie! This has real punch and that wow factor! Real improvement.

Michael Wolf
07-18-2009, 08:02 AM
I missed the first but I must say that WOW.... this is a superb shot and it looks like once again BPN has helped us all by learning.

Thanaboon Jearkjirm
07-18-2009, 08:55 AM
Haven't see the frist one but this one is beautiful, the shadow in the water goes very well with silhouette. I love the mood in this picture.

Axel Hildebrandt
07-18-2009, 11:35 AM
I liked the first one but this is even better, good composition, silhouette, reflection and colors.

Morkel Erasmus
07-18-2009, 04:08 PM
print it big. love it Connie! very simplistic, peaceful and effective...