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David Roach
07-16-2009, 09:44 AM
Created at Wako just after sunrise.
1DMKIIN 400DO ISO 400 F5.6@1/800

Axel Hildebrandt
07-16-2009, 10:10 AM
I like the morning light, setting and raised crest. I might tone down the whites a bit more, sharpen the bird more and remove the bright spot on the bill.

Daniel Cadieux
07-16-2009, 11:05 AM
Adding to Axel's comments you could also apply some NR to the bg, and eliminate some of the OOF stuff near the legs and near left edge. Raised cresst look nice.

David Roach
07-16-2009, 11:38 AM
With some suggested changes.

Stu Bowie
07-16-2009, 12:47 PM
Sweet light David, and love that crest. Great work on the repost.

Fabs Forns
07-16-2009, 12:52 PM
Great repost, David. I still detect some magenta in the whites.

Ákos Lumnitzer
07-16-2009, 07:08 PM
My first thought was the magenta too. I would also remove the white speck on the bill as it (to me) adds nothing. Your repost is heaps better though Dave. Love this image. Thanks for sharing. :)