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Lorant Voros
07-15-2009, 08:28 PM
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/1255/songsparrow2bpn.jpg

Another picture from Monday; another sparrow that was introduced me by Manuel. All comments are welcome.

1DMKIII
500mm + 1.4
ISO800
F:7.1
1/640
Fill flash with Better Beamer

Desmond Chan
07-15-2009, 09:19 PM
It looks to me a photo with good exposure and details. You may consider improving the sharpness a bit and not showing the perch that much though. Thanks for sharing !

Daniel Cadieux
07-15-2009, 09:27 PM
Nice alert pose, and the perch looks good. Nice BG too - although you may opt to tone down the darker patch in front of the bird. There is a dark line above the contour of the rock, and especially thick in LLC, that should be dealt with.

Juan Carlos Vindas
07-15-2009, 10:17 PM
Precioso!

Love the way this guy is posing, he looks so proud!
There seems to be some halo around the rock. I also wish to see this one a bit larger. IMO.

Axel Hildebrandt
07-15-2009, 10:28 PM
Pose, sharpness, eye contact and perch look good. It looks as if you blurred the BG but there is a darkish band near the perch and Daniel mentioned some artifacts already.

Ramon M. Casares
07-15-2009, 10:56 PM
It works for me as presented, great pose and BG, nice light and colors, exposure, textures and sharpness look good two.
Congratulations!

Simon Bennett
07-15-2009, 10:57 PM
A fine image indeed.

Kiran Poonacha
07-16-2009, 03:26 AM
Beautiful image Lorant, loved the pose and details here. Beautiful bird too...

Dave Hardcastle
07-16-2009, 04:40 PM
As others have said, great pose and background. Without the black line around the rock it would be perfect.

Ákos Lumnitzer
07-16-2009, 08:37 PM
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great pose and HA. Perfect in fact. I'd apply a little more NR to the BG. Thanks for sharing,