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Jan Wegener
07-07-2009, 06:31 AM
one from a few years back, newly processed...

Mark IIn
600 IS

1/800 F8 Iso 200 Last light

this mud flat back then was the worst I've ever been into, I think I smelled really nasty for the next three days :D

http://www.vogelfotografien.de/Test/alp.jpg

Leo Berzins
07-07-2009, 07:15 AM
Nice pose and light. The rising left foot and resultant water pull add interest.
Extending the canvas on the left might be worth considering (if you're comfortable with doing that) and maybe a bit more sharpening.

Kerry Barlow
07-07-2009, 07:30 AM
Great pose and detail. Sharpness looks ok on my monitor. The only thing I would say is that it looks a bit hemmed in, and a bit of space to the left would be good if any was available.

Alan Murphy
07-07-2009, 09:35 AM
Great shot Jan. I would go a bit brighter.

Thanaboon Jearkjirm
07-07-2009, 09:54 AM
Love the wing up position, sharpness looks alright to me. Agree with more room.

Aidan Briggs
07-07-2009, 10:10 AM
Wow! Great wingspread, BG, and lovely golden light. I like the close crop, and it seems tack sharp to me. I agree with Alan on the brightness though.

David Roach
07-07-2009, 11:07 AM
Wonderful light, pose, details and composition. Congrats!

Stu Bowie
07-07-2009, 12:26 PM
Super low angle, and what sweet light, showing up lovely warm colours. I agree some selective sharpening will work, and adding to the left too.

Chris Kotze
07-07-2009, 12:50 PM
Great pose and angle. lovely show of the wings. Another vote to add a bit of canvas.

David Fletcher
07-07-2009, 01:43 PM
Super pose, light and viewpoint. Another vote for some canvas.

Morkel Erasmus
07-07-2009, 04:10 PM
stunning pose and details! another vote here for lighter and more canvas to the left and I would also consider rotating slightly clockwise to straighten the waterline.

Arthur Morris
07-07-2009, 05:26 PM
Hey Jan, Stunning, stunning, stunning. Love the rasied wings and the killer light and the raised foot and the streaked belly. IMNSHO, this does NOT need any CW rotation....

Where? And when?

Jan Wegener
07-08-2009, 02:03 AM
it was taken in Oktober on a small Island in the North Sea (Germany), where you have fantastic chances for shorebirds.

Arthur Morris
07-08-2009, 03:30 AM
Thanks Jan. The timing confirms that it is in fresh juvenal plumage.