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Kathy Reeves
07-05-2009, 08:05 AM
Okay, I am a little behind on the assignments---things should start slowing down in a couple of weeks and I can get back here more often. I always learn so much--it is such a fantastic site!!
This was for the DOF assignment.:o
Most of you know how mean these little Snowy can be. The one in front just made the mistake of encroaching on the others territory.
f.9, 1/4000, ISO 1250, -.03, 400mm, AV.

Jackie Schuknecht
07-05-2009, 08:48 AM
I like the action capture Kathy and your DOF. The front bird is nice and sharp and you have frozen the action. Thought it was a little dark so I brightened it in curves and put it through a warming filter. I like your crop. I think you should try posting in Avian:)

Cheryl Flory
07-05-2009, 09:11 AM
The action of the front bird is great, and you have wonderful details even beneath the wings. I like how that bird really stands out from the background. I think the repost improved an already excellent image.

Mark Fuge
07-05-2009, 10:19 AM
Nice image. I would normally like to see a little more canvas in front of the bird, but given that this give the impression of more of a "jumping bird action", given the head angle and the feet, than a bird taking flight, I like it as is. As it is unclear where the bird is going, so the addition of canvas on the left, in my view, would not improve it.

David Thomasson
07-05-2009, 11:23 AM
The DoF works like a champ on this one, and you froze the moment of action beautifully. All i would do it lighten the birds some (especially the escapee in front) -- but not the background, and perhaps take out the branch at top left that merges with the wingtip. Nice job, Kathy!

animated gif (425K)

http://img50.imageshack.us/img50/6975/escape.gif

Cheryl Slechta
07-05-2009, 03:40 PM
Kathy, great capture. And I love David's animated repost!

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Cheryl

Alfred Forns
07-05-2009, 04:21 PM
Great post !!!! Love the suggestions and replies !!!

Image wise all I Could wish for is a little more room up front !!! Excellent !!!

Harold Davis
07-05-2009, 05:07 PM
nice, sharp base image, kathy. love what david did with the repost. really nice!!!

Gus Cobos
07-05-2009, 05:48 PM
HI Kathy,
I like the composition and capture, you sure captured the action, I like the open wing...very good advise given...looking forward to your next one...:cool:

Lance Peters
07-06-2009, 03:05 AM
Davids repost rocks for me - I roo feel like it needs a little more room up front.

Well done Kathy!!

Kathy Reeves
07-06-2009, 02:25 PM
Thank you everyone--as usual great suggestions!!

Kathy