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john crookes
02-04-2008, 07:48 PM
Black Crown Night Heron
waiting for a fish near a dam on the Charles River
Nikon D2X with 400mm 2.8 at f7 and 1/160th
ISO 400

Arthur Morris
02-04-2008, 08:00 PM
Sharp, nice COMP and perfect EXP. And a nice subject too. The foreground rock is a distraction. At the very least, I would crop away 2/3 to 3/4 of it.

later and love, artie

ps: Sort of like the image below. Also got rid of some whitewash, a hot spot or two, and a stick, mostly with the Patch Tool.

Axel Hildebrandt
02-04-2008, 08:04 PM
Nice pose and details. I like Artie's crop suggestion. Could you have moved lower and to your left?

john crookes
02-04-2008, 08:07 PM
i wished i could have moved a little but i had about a six inch window to photograph through as it was
I am not a big guy on removing objects I just feel it was there and I am responsible for what is in the frame. I don't mind if others do it it is just my own feelings

Maxis Gamez
02-04-2008, 08:15 PM
I have to agree with Artie's comment and second post.

Judy Lynn Malloch
02-04-2008, 09:14 PM
Great capture and perfect exposure but I agree with Artie's suggestion about the rock. Thanks for sharing John !!