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Dave Phillips
06-30-2009, 08:54 PM
Not as romantic as most.....lol, just wrote this
Over The Hill
Here I am alone going over the hill
The wind is calm and the waters still
I've worked really hard and given my all
But I feel a peace as I heed the call
The light is getting brighter and my heart almost still
As I go a little bit farther over the hill
denise ippolito
06-30-2009, 09:11 PM
Dave, Wow!! Most impressive!!! Your image speaks a thousand words-but your written words are so strong and deep. The last few words really got me-they fit perfectly together.
Fabs Forns
06-30-2009, 09:19 PM
Very touching, Dave, it breaks my heart.
Ákos Lumnitzer
06-30-2009, 09:57 PM
This is awesome Sir Dave! So meaningful, I can feel for the old horse. The picture matches perfectly. I sense the sadness, the reluctance of the end drawing near. :) Congrats!
Julie Kenward
07-01-2009, 07:28 AM
I love it! The look of the horse totally sets the scene for that poem sentiment. You matched them perfectly and really did a wonderful job on both.
Lance Warley
07-01-2009, 03:43 PM
Superb, Dave. Touching. Heartbreaking. Beautiful.
You say so much with so few words.
As Denise said, the words and the image fit perfectly.
Grace Scalzo
07-06-2009, 05:11 AM
Wonderful, Dave.
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