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Ákos Lumnitzer
06-28-2009, 10:39 PM
I just did a little google search on what this is. So here is my first attempt. Hope you like it. :)

Green is life to life
Sweet colors of the rainbows
God’s ways make me smile

Lance Warley
06-29-2009, 05:52 AM
Nice first try, Akos.

Amazing structure, isn't it? Quite a challenge.

Send that bird over here, won't you?

Ákos Lumnitzer
06-29-2009, 06:12 AM
IT is strange Lance indeed, 5,7,5 a tough code to crack. I have another, but I need a sunrise image and I am not into that unfortunately. :) Thanks for your encouragement.

denise ippolito
06-29-2009, 06:52 AM
Akos, I think this is very good especially for a first try-I can't seem to wrap my brain around them,they are very tough!! I think you picked the perfect image for this!!

Julie Kenward
06-29-2009, 05:33 PM
Nice try on the haiku, Akros! I know what you mean about it being tough at first but it you keep trying you'll find your brain will start to think in that 5-7-5 pattern!