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Mike Veltri
06-28-2009, 03:31 PM
A recent photo taken while persuing other grassland birds.
http://www.pbase.com/mikeveltri/image/114247005.jpg
Canon 1D MarkIII
Canon 500mm F/4 IS
Canon 1.4x II
1/2500s
F/6.3
Fill Flash -1 1/3
Natural Perch (milk weed pods)
Thanks for looking :D
Mike Veltri

Axel Hildebrandt
06-28-2009, 03:34 PM
Interesting perch, good eye contact, details and BG. I might give it a little bit more room at the top and desaturate the greens a few points. A little bit head turn towards you would have been nice but I like it as is.

Harold Davis
06-28-2009, 04:29 PM
agree with axel about the room up top. looks fantastic with that gnarly perch. bird looks almost 3D.

Jasper Doest
06-29-2009, 03:28 AM
I like the size of the perch a lot as it gives you a sens of scale! I agree with Axel about his compositional suggestion. Do they use this pech a lot? If so, you might want to go back with some warmer light. Great use of fill-flash btw!

Gyorgy Szimuly
06-29-2009, 05:48 AM
Nice image. Composition wise I would crop slightly from left and would add a bit of to the top.
Perch looks lovely. :)

Szimi

DanWalters
06-29-2009, 07:07 AM
Love the comp and the sharpness of the bird and perch. Nice clean background as well.

Danny Laredo
06-29-2009, 12:26 PM
Nice looking perch and composition. All in all a nice image.

Ramon M. Casares
06-29-2009, 08:01 PM
Loved the perch and BG, nice light and colors, great contrast between subject/perch and BG. Great detail, and loose comp. Congratulations!