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Alma K Bailey
06-27-2009, 08:22 PM
F9 @ 1/250
100 mm
ISO 400
Macro lens
Hand Held

Ilija Dukovski
06-27-2009, 11:25 PM
Very interesting image, I like the feather detail and light bird on dark BG contrast.
The light patches in the BG I think should be removed if possible.

Can you tell us more about the techs please. What camera, flash?? macro lens 100mm!?
Very unusual...

Dave Barnes
06-28-2009, 04:14 AM
This is a very interesting image. I would suggest adding a bit of cavas above and to the right the bird.
The bird should be placed off centre to improve the comp.
I would also look at reducing the intensity of the highlights in the BG.

Keith Carver
06-28-2009, 06:36 AM
I also like the light bird on dark BG, although you might soften or eliminate the whitish areas in the BG. Agree that adding some canvas to the top would help, also move the bird off center. Bird is very sharp considering the 1/250 SS. Thanks for the post, Alma.

Morkel Erasmus
06-28-2009, 12:55 PM
I agree on moving the bird off-centre and toning down bright spots. Love the sense of frantic movement communicated here. I think one more round of NR on the BG will make it stand out a bit more.
:)

Alma K Bailey
06-29-2009, 09:02 AM
Ilija, Dave, Kieth and Morkel,

Thank you all for the kind comments on this hummer, And Thank you for taking the time and helping me to improve this shot.

I did a repost of it reworked,

Thank you again,Alma