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Aidan Briggs
06-24-2009, 11:28 AM
Getting in the mood for the contest coming up. Should be fun, as I have always enjoyed abstracts.

Morro Bay, CA

50D, 60mm macro,
1/640, f/2.8, ISO 100

Mike Moats
06-24-2009, 07:44 PM
Hey Aidan, I like the nice soft look, for me I would like a little less of the BG on the top. Like the point of focus.

Ed Vatza
06-25-2009, 05:49 AM
I agree with Mike here. The background seems a bit too dominant. I would look for the same kind of selective focus but with petals (oof of course) surrounding the focal point.

Julie Kenward
06-25-2009, 07:31 AM
Aidan, I agree with the others - first thing I thought was "less BG". I wonder, too, if you had been just a hair higher if that front white petal wouldn't have been quite as prominent at the front of the frame.