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denise ippolito
06-16-2009, 12:53 PM
I try to squeeze inside of you
But somehow it's not right
I have a vision in my mind
But darn, you're just too tight
Your soft sleek look it beckons me
So what's a girl to do
I'll force my way inside your sole
You're now my favorite shoe!

Lance Warley
06-17-2009, 05:48 AM
Hilarious.

The photo is great the words are great. This certainly put a smile on my face.

Funny how women think about shoes. My daughter was just crowing about what a great deal she got on an expensive pair, even thought they didn't really fit. Huh?

denise ippolito
06-17-2009, 12:16 PM
Thanks Lance. I'm glad I'm not the only one that buys shoes that don't really fit right!!

Julie Kenward
06-17-2009, 09:54 PM
I'm all about the big, floppy tennis shoe myself but I LOVE this poem. Even an unshoeaholic like me thinks it's great.

My only drawback on the image is the very center OOF petal. I know this is a flipped, right...any way you can crisp that section in the center up? The rest is out of this world beautiful!

Dave Mills
06-17-2009, 10:11 PM
I must say Denise...you have a way with words. Enjoyed it!

denise ippolito
06-18-2009, 06:10 AM
Jules, The center is OOF because of the flip and I tried to sharpen but I may need to do a re-flip. It will probably change the look of it. But I will give it a try.Thanks.
Dave, Thankyou for your kind words.



Here is another flip of the same flower,as I can't get the center of the flower sharp enough.

Ákos Lumnitzer
06-21-2009, 09:13 PM
Very cool Denise.
I am not a shoe-a-holic so I now confess and let me be shot down in flames. :D