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denise ippolito
06-15-2009, 06:03 AM
The Hiker


I walk a path beyond the fields
Where flowers lace the sky

The cool fresh scent of mountain air
Has lifted me up high

The daylight fades, I slow my pace
I haven't got a fear

I'll camp the night and watch the flames
The sound of life is near

The dawn will break, I'll rise again
To start a brand new day

I'll breath it in and fill my soul
I'll soon be on my way.

Dave Mills
06-15-2009, 12:18 PM
Denise...Your words are putting me there...wonderful!

Lance Warley
06-15-2009, 03:28 PM
As Dave said, you're words are putting me there, too.

This has a timeless quality...The Journey, The Trek, The Adventure into the unknown. The meter has a hiking kind of cadence, so the rhythm fits the content.

The Road goes on and on. Very impressive, Denise.

denise ippolito
06-15-2009, 04:16 PM
Thankyou both for your kind words.

Julie Kenward
06-15-2009, 06:33 PM
Lance, is right; I felt like I was walking as I read it! Beautiful painterly feel Denise...you softened up the "hike" perfectly!

denise ippolito
06-15-2009, 07:13 PM
Thanks Julie!:)

Ákos Lumnitzer
06-21-2009, 09:16 PM
This is awesome Denise. Is it a PS filtered image or did you paint it? It has a magical feel and your spirit is really coming through those words. :)

denise ippolito
06-22-2009, 06:16 AM
Akos, I used a Topaz Simplify Filter, You can download a free 30 day trial if you google Topaz Filters-also check out their new filter Clean-2. It's great!!