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denise ippolito
06-11-2009, 06:54 AM
You

New air
New sounds
New smells
New you

First walk
First talk
First laugh
First 2

Then school
Then job
Then love
I do

Last words
Last sight
Last breath
Last you

Julie Kenward
06-11-2009, 08:37 PM
Alright, girl...no more excuses! You knocked it out of the park twice in a row! Now quit being shy and let it come.

I feel like I just lived an entire romance in fifteen seconds. Wonderful!

Lance Warley
06-12-2009, 05:41 AM
Incredible, Denise. Your words are so evocative. What Julie said, 10 times.

Reading this just makes the emotions bubble right up inside me.

denise ippolito
06-12-2009, 08:15 AM
Thankyou both for your kind words.

Grace Scalzo
06-12-2009, 08:33 AM
Beautiful, Denise. Very powerful words and image.

LOVE your cover image as well!! Creativity oozes from you.

denise ippolito
06-12-2009, 08:43 AM
Grace, Thankyou so much for your kind words. I am so honored to be on the cover.

Dave Mills
06-12-2009, 11:36 AM
I look at your image and I see tense movement using neutral colors. It does match the words stating the cycle of life in a very eloquent and direct fashion. Much meaning within...and enjoyed immensely.

denise ippolito
06-12-2009, 11:48 AM
Dave, Thankyou for your thoughts.

Juan Carlos Vindas
06-15-2009, 02:52 PM
Very nice Denise. I also like the picture.

denise ippolito
06-15-2009, 07:22 PM
Juan, Thankyou I appreciate it.

John Ippolito
08-09-2009, 05:02 PM
Denise, I'm late to the party here. I've never even looked in this forum!
A life in 32 words... this is so simple... so eloquent... so amazing... your talents are amazing!

denise ippolito
08-12-2009, 02:18 PM
John, Thankyou for your kind words and for taking the time to comment. I appreciate it.