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Kerry Perkins
06-10-2009, 12:07 AM
Egrets winging high
Magic light of winter falls
Heaven can't be far...

Lance Warley
06-10-2009, 05:34 AM
This is great, Kerry.

You nailed the form. A wonderful haiku. And "Heaven can't be far..." What a line. It should be the title of an album cover by Dylan or Delaney and Bonnie or someone with that kind of vibe.

By the way, would you please send those magenta clouds to my camera? Today, if it's not too much of a rush?

denise ippolito
06-10-2009, 05:49 AM
Kerry, Very nicely done,your image is a perfect compliment.

Julie Kenward
06-11-2009, 08:35 PM
I'm standing up clapping on the inside, Kerry...I truly am! What a sense of peace the image provides and then those words - I'll bet heaven does look a bit like this only even more technicolor than we can ever imagine! That was lovely.

Ákos Lumnitzer
06-28-2009, 10:34 PM
Very neat Kerry. I just learned what a Haiku is. :)