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Kaushik Balakumar
05-27-2009, 07:07 PM
Third (and final) image from Black Forest (Germany) of the Triberg waterfalls.
This time I included the sun in the frame with slightly different composition.

Techs:
Nikon D300, Nikkor 12-24mm
f/22, 0.6 sec, ISO200
3-stop soft GND, exposure blends from single raw file

Critiques welcome...

Roman Kurywczak
05-27-2009, 07:20 PM
Hi Kaushik,
I really like the comp here and the flow of the falls....but the sun placement.....edge of frame is not working for me here. I did try a crop of it by scrolling.....and it does work for me. This one has a darker moody feel than your previous posts......and that I find quite appealing. Nicely composed.

Fabs Forns
05-27-2009, 11:38 PM
I have to agree 100% with Roman on the upper part of the frame, even in the thumbnail it screams to be taken aout. The mood of the rest is beautiful and very well composed.

Paul Marcellini
05-31-2009, 05:47 PM
I love the comp and think cropping the top half of the sun works. Just to give you a hint of the light source. Really well processed otherwise. Well done.